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I wish I could produce a masterpiece,
Something I could dedicate to her;
Something into which I could release
The stuff of dreams too wondrous to recur.

I know my limitations all too well -
I’ve often had them pointed out to me;
Meanwhile, those things at which I might excel
Turn into things that just weren’t meant to be.

Not being any good at very much,
I’ll often quit before I even start;
I don’t exactly have the Midas touch -
Least of all when making works of art.

~

I’ve tried and failed so many times to paint
A portrait of her pure and faultless face;
It always seems that I’ve yet to acquaint
Myself with all the colours she can grace.

I thought that maybe I could write a song
Whose melody might cause her heart to melt
But every note I wrote just sounded wrong;
No chords would quite convey the way I felt.

And once again, I find I can’t create
A poem fit to greet her gracious eyes -
Although, with forty notebooks filled to date,
This hasn’t come as much of a surprise.

~

So maybe I should just admit defeat
And hope a proper artist comes this way;
Someone who can make her life complete,
While I get back to dreaming mine away.


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:iconpaatkaa:
~Paatkaa May 20, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you for the watch :w00t!: Heres my facebook website: [link] :heart:
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:iconarianejurquet:
Thanks for the :+fav: :-)
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:iconryckrudd:
Appreciate the bulk faves. Keep creating ;)
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:iconjane-beata:
=jane-beata May 31, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
:bulletorange: Thank you for :+favlove: my work, much appreciated :shamrock:

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:iconbrokenchaoz:
~BrokenChaoz May 28, 2012  Student Photographer
Thanks for the faves and the watch. =]
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:iconstefymoondust:
thanks for the fav :-)
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:iconany--mel:
Thank you for the :+fav:!:D
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:iconworsttragedy:
~WorstTragedy Oct 23, 2011  Student Photographer
Thanks so much for the favs and the watch. I really appreciate that :heart:
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*Sloppygee Oct 20, 2011  Professional Traditional Artist
Thanks for the watch ...and favs. Love your "Lady Jane" piece. I'm gonna go enjoy the rest of your gallery now...
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:iconbackarrow:
You're welcome and thank you too :salute:
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